This story starts from a real life experience I had, goes into fantasy mode, then back into real, then back into fantasy. The change is marked with a *.I had a lot of fun with this and I hope you do as well.
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“Sorry, what?”
I was in the fi...
Jake
Erotic and creative. I adore the idea that you mixed fact with fiction, and told the reader where. This opens up so much more to the imagination. Very arousing. Cheers.
GrayWolfThat's what I call a shoe fetish! This story begins so innocent that the twist comes as a real surprise. It doesn't matter that she finally not even tries to escape. It's the outcome of her very own style to get attention. It makes the relationship... moreThat's what I call a shoe fetish! This story begins so innocent that the twist comes as a real surprise. It doesn't matter that she finally not even tries to escape. It's the outcome of her very own style to get attention. It makes the relationship between hunter and prey really tangible for the reader. What a fine read!
Bernard DepommeA generally well written story ("runned" = "ran" of a woman getting herself into a hunt game. It also flashes back to her earlier years to set up her way of thinking about things like the game aspect of sports conflict. Very nicely... moreA generally well written story ("runned" = "ran" of a woman getting herself into a hunt game. It also flashes back to her earlier years to set up her way of thinking about things like the game aspect of sports conflict. Very nicely done...
of a woman getting herself into a hunt game. It also flashes back to her earlier years to set up her way of thinking about things like the game aspect of sports conflict. Very nicely... more