It was the most amazing thing I had ever seen. The bright silver spike sparkled in the light from the lights set up around the dark basement room. It seemed massive, almost as big around as my wrist and at least 6 foot tall or more. This man’s online prof...
HankFall
haunting and revealing....your emotions as you accept where your erotic dreams have delivered you....so intimate in the first person ...almost as if you are "rehearsing"...mmm...preparing....mmm
SophieI like powerful short stories like this. A single topic brought to the point without much ado. Not too long, but detailed enough to let me dive in to the feelings of the main character. True, the topic also appeals to me
Alas, what regularly confuses... moreI like powerful short stories like this. A single topic brought to the point without much ado. Not too long, but detailed enough to let me dive in to the feelings of the main character. True, the topic also appeals to me
Alas, what regularly confuses me is when the first-person narrator dies at the end. How could he or she have told the story then?
Darío
(Sorry, I wrote it in my language) Exciting first-person impalement narration from the victim's perspective, detailed description of the internal sensations. Thanks for sharing, Jade.
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