I frown at the fuel gauge as my car comes to a sputtering stop. I peer into the darkness and sigh while reaching for my cellphone. “Fucking Hell!” I yell as I remember that some scumbag had stolen it at the Christmas Eve party that I’d j...
I begin to wake up, the room fuzzy at first, but slowly coming into focus as whatever drug is in my system begins to wear off. I am in a dimly lit room, the single bulb hanging from the ceiling revealing...
Everything went bad after I was sent with my platoon to Bataan in 1942. The Japs attacked us and we were retreating and retreating until there was nowhere to retreat any more. Then the command decided we should surrender to the enemy to save lives of the ...
It's not well-written and needs a lot of editing but I had a load of these stories collected for editing, and I've gotten around to none of them so I just decided to publish them as they are.
Samara is a recurring character in most of my stories. She i...
It's not well-written and needs a lot of editing but I had a load of these stories collected for editing, and I've gotten around to none of them so I just decided to publish them as they are.
Samara is a recurring character in most of my stories. She i...
It's not well-written and needs a lot of editing but I had a load of these stories collected for editing, and I've gotten around to none of them so I just decided to publish them as they are.
Samara is a recurring character in most of my storie...
It's not well-written and needs a lot of editing but I had a load of these stories collected for editing, and I've gotten around to none of them so I just decided to publish them as they are.
Samara is a recurring character in most of my storie...
Bernard Depomme
A good blog story. Pay attention to the author's note up at the top, suspend any disbelief, and enjoy the story. It will grab you much like a "facehugger."
NOTE: It's not well-written and needs a lot of editing but I had a load of these stories collected for editing, and I've gotten around to none of them so I just decided to publish them as they are.
Buffy stirred in her sleep, groaning sleepily, feeling t...
Bernard Depomme@navelfondle14, This does not detract from the value of your story...also you made it very clear it needed editing and clean up. "Portly" may not be a good word choice in terms of describing breasts and thighs of a woman. It has connotations... more@navelfondle14, This does not detract from the value of your story...also you made it very clear it needed editing and clean up. "Portly" may not be a good word choice in terms of describing breasts and thighs of a woman. It has connotations of "fat." It has a general use with men. May I suggest 'delectible," "toned" for the thighs, "rounded" or "perky" for the breasts...but definitely something else? Again, this is but a minor bump in the story...not a big concern at all. less
Bernard Depomme
A nice fan fiction blog story of what happens to Buffy the Vampire Slayer one night while being awakened from her sleep. Good descriptive passages, and the author attempts to get the reader to feel what is going on. Nicely done.
Dying in the Trench (With NavelPainSlave)
In the trench the few remaining men resisted the enemy advance. The summer heat was oppressive. Slowly but inexorably, the enemy advanced between the wires, clearing obstacles, taking cover behind the bodies of d...
artho
great story
wash, christen bayonets in girl's guts. bayonet designed for belly
https://darkfetishnet.com/index.php/albums/photos/view/13709/443398/shot-or-bayonette
Dying in the Trench (With NavelPainSlave)
In the trench the few remaining men resisted the enemy advance. The summer heat was oppressive. Slowly but inexorably, the enemy advanced between the wires, clearing obstacles, taking cover behind the bodies of d...
artho
great story
wash, christen bayonets in girl's guts. bayonet designed for belly
https://darkfetishnet.com/index.php/albums/photos/view/13709/443398/shot-or-bayonette
